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I wrote this poem over the summer!. I just started wirting about 6 months ago!. What do you think of this poem and be honest!?

My nightly waltz

This intricate night,
Wraps its arms around me tight,
Engrossing me, preserving me,
Interlacing its fingers around my being!.

The embodiment of the night,
Carried me further into my reverie,
As I waltz with this kind stranger,
Surrounded by harmonious winds!.

The clouds and trees mock me in jealousy,
Dancing merely by the winds essence,
Swaying back and forth without a pattern!.
I proceed, unmoved to laugh at their persistence!.

The night’s dulcet tune,
Finally puts my waltzing to a rest,
Closing my eyes,
Knowing that as I dream,

The battered walls will sway,
The maple floors will sing,
And this aged stricken house
Will dance in my ecstasy!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is very good!. It is like you have been writing for years!. There is a great use of words!. I would suggest not to put too many of your poems on a site because people may copy them if they are very good at that!. But it is great to put up poems to check out a new style!. I do that all the time!. Some people write for years and are not as near that good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well worth the 6 months work you put into it!. I can't describe how brilliant it is!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love this poem!! It is wonderful!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com