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Ocean Whispers

Softly, as Night spreads
darkness over the waters
Ocean whispers
shhh, do not be afraid
I am here
Luna rises full
my tides will surge
to meet her and you
will hear me speak
let your tears flow
at break of Day
I will give them
back to you!.
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This is a wonderfully sensuous poem that makes me feel that the ocean is a wonderfully sensuous lover!. And there's the rub!. She can lure me, caress me with sweet sounds, and comfort me!. But if I succumb to her powers, I must abandon all hope, certain doom awaits!. And yet, and yet, I take the plunge!. It doesn't seem like a bad deal at all!. The ocean waves!.!.!. and I wave right back at her!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The ocean whispers to you to not be afraid!. Yes, i feel that line and also it will give back your tears at break of day!. I could not have said it any better or felt it any deeper, or appreciated the words and sentiment and better!. You have said the words my heart needed to hear this evening, and for that, I thank you and send a King sized huggle n squeezle!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, the ocean always whispers "do not be afraid" and yet i am afraid of that consummate power, the force of tides and the pull of the moon!. As incredibly beautiful as the ocean is, I remain in awed fear of that power!. This poem is as powerful as the tides, and as beautiful as the sea!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I've always thought of the ocean as one of my truest friends, a safe haven to escape to, to whisper my fears to for only her to know and be carried off in her waves!.!.!.and I have often heard her gentle, reassuring whisper back!. There is something very comforting and tender about this poem that keeps me reading it over and over!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very beautiful!. I can almost feel the cool comfort of the ocean wrapping itself around me, encasing my skin as I take the first step into the crashing waves!. I hope to leave my worries behind, allow them to be consumed, along with the residual sand and crushed jellyfish!. I'll be welcomed in the moon's glow and escape the shadows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wow, what a touching wave of romanticism over Y7 Q&A lately!.
Is anyone in here who saved few tears for later on, case they will still be needed !?!?!?
I hope I have finished mine !.!.!.

Much thanks for your poem!. I realised I have forgotten all these years about the Ocean, my first love!.
Thank you for your lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is so serene,
hearing the ocean
has a beautiful sound
that brings peace
one can almost go to
the ocean the sound will
put them to sleep!.
Just walking along the shore
is beautiful hearing the ocean!.
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Thank you, Elaine, for the inspiration to continue with a 'thing' I've been playing with!.!.!.!.Triolet!? Maybe!. Maybe not!.!.!.!.Just THANKS for the inspiration!.!.!.

*My "troilet" still has the damned pink stain!.!.!.!.I guess it could be worse!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The sound of the ocean on the shore always lifts my heart, draws me out!. Your poem took me there, to the magic of a moonlit beach, thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful and almost soothing!. Great job, and I hope I see you posting more poetry soon!.
Note: 'darkness' should be capitalized!. Okay, all good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Lovely, comforting, connected!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the poem, its gentleness soothes my soul!. I tried to post on The Forum, but none of my mail programs seem to fit or send!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Soft and beautfully written!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have successfully personified and romanticized the Ocean!Www@QuestionHome@Com

to wade in the salty water and feel the shifting sands as the ocean inhales and exhales!.!.!.we know when we are home!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Who 'd resist such offer! So romantic! The ocean at night under full moon!.!.which is taming the other!? I cant tell!. Very well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really enjoyed this alot!. I went to the beach today!. Otherwise known as the" Alantic Ocean!."Www@QuestionHome@Com

Crescent cast shadows
cover sand steps
spun as one, in Loves
magic diurnal danceWww@QuestionHome@Com

True love!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Beautiful thoughts, remarkable well written!. I don't understand where the tears come from!. Can you give me a hint!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

:-)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i am going with Damsel McDreamy's answer!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.:)Www@QuestionHome@Com

Top poem E! Well you sure inspired ME!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very nice!. I'm not done reading it!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com