My poems...What do you think of them?

Question: My poems!.!.!.What do you think of them!?

Tell me the complete truth!.

My hand in his, my head on his chest,
Hide away the present, and give my crying eyes a rest!.
Im his arms, im always safe!.
But then i come back and all i feel is hate!.
A blade in my hand, a bullet to my heart!.
The memories comfort me, im addicted from the
start!.As the blood seeps down i feel no pain,
dripping to the ground, like pouring rain!.

What do you think of it!? Am i good!? Do i suck!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i like it its good!. keep on writing no matter what anybody says =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

the blade and the blood and the bullet are eh!.!.!.lighten up!.

Read one "dark" poem, you've read them all!.!.!.if people cannot take criticism PLEASE do not ask for it!.!.!.the problem with our society is that everybody is constantly being told how great they are!.!.!.honesty works sometimes my little emo people!!!

uhhh!.!.!.if you don't want people to read it, don't post it!.!.!.and is "stfu" poetic!? shame on you!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

thanks man, your answer on mine lol
yours is really good too !
i actually just got back into writing so i don't have more at the moment
and that rat dog person, you need to stfu, you commented mine too and if you don't like the darker poetry, don't read itWww@QuestionHome@Com

THATS R3LL3 G3WD!
THANKSZ FOR YOUR COMM3NT ON MiN3S!.
&& i HAV A THiNG FOR SADD PO3MS T3W!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

it is very good, keep writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

so romantic, could you send me one to quote to my girl!?Www@QuestionHome@Com