Wrote new poem, how do you like it?

Question: Wrote new poem, how do you like it!?

I remember a time
I was confidant you would be mine
I remember back when
I would see you sometime again
I remember how I used to feel
Back before it was such a big deal
I remember your pretty smile
although, it has been awhile
I remember how you were shy,
but with me, you were open as the sky
I remember when broke my heart
and now, there is no happy end to this partWww@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

To be honest, its a little soppy and sentimental!.
Maybe get the rhythm down more, try reading it out loud and cutting out some of the words to make if flow better!. But overall, the theme is fairly standard!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it but the end I don't understandWww@QuestionHome@Com

honestly its ok theres just not enough!.!.!.to it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com