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Question: Will this poem cause you to ponder!?
Clothes
By S!.F!. Reborn
If your heart were a closet,
How many sets of clothes would it have!?
Would it change for each situation,
Place style over friendly relations!?
I would rather be a coat of warmth,
In the cold!.
I'd rather be a scarf,
And shield against winds!.
I'd be a pair of shoes,
That never got old!.
A nice hat,
Shielding eyes with my brim!.
I'd want my every thread,
To be sturdy and strong!.
So I could shield your body,
All your life long!.
You want to wear me over,
Again and again!.
The closest that a coat could come,
To being a friend!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What a unique and compassionate perspective and imagery!. This made me "ponder" the clothes in my own heart's closet!. I, like you, choose to have the one sturdy and protective garment over the many stylish ones!. And your coat of friendship warms me, my friend!. I love this!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I strongly agree with all the comments above me!.
Wonderful poem!
P!.S!.
The body of an inner icicled heart,
I know it needs neither coats, nor nice hat,
Except of all those it would work her sturdy scarf
Against to any longer more breath!.
Nothing more than a woody old shoe,
Is needed, if someone have a clueWww@QuestionHome@Com
"I'd want my every thread,
To be sturdy and strong!.
So I could shield your body,
All your life long!.
You want to wear me over,
Again and again!.
The closest that a coat could come,
To being a friend"
that my friend, is incredibly well expressedWww@QuestionHome@Com
I have given up trying to write Poetry!. There are so many real Poets out there, and you, Sir, are one of them!. (Keep it up!.)
MINISTER
S!.F!.C!.U!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wear the heart on the outside so it can more easily help those around you!. Lovely poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful, thank you, Semper!! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
SF!.!.!.Hey man!.!.!.At first, I thought the simplicity left it missing some umphhh!. On the third run, I saw it!.!.and then I looked at the question!.!.!.
You win !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com
I think my friend, that you would wear VERY well!.!.
Sturdy, strong and true!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You always make me ponder, Semper!. I love your imagery in this very much!. You are a warm coat to my spirit!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, and I like it: Very well expressed subject, in the lovable style of Sempre!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Excellent
I'm sure your friends would enjoy this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh, my, the tenderness expressed in this is so sincere!.!.!.
it shows your compassionate spirt!.!.!.!.such a gift!
Thank you!Www@QuestionHome@Com
wow ur good!. u should be a poet!. :)Www@QuestionHome@Com