Do you like my poem????????????????

Question: Do you like my poem!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?

Thou eyes are the windows to the soul of a ex con of insecurities
his sunlight,
melted my rime covered throb
and kissed the midnight away

thou amorous mahogany
touched me
sheiled
and concealed me in cosecrated dedication

words
are everything and!.!.!.!.!.!.
nothing
because

You are:
Love

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

i see A LOT of potential!. very traditional, but still my taste!. the words flow beautifully and the order is perfect!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'd say!.!.!. yeah, without a doubt!.!.!. it's definitely and utterly!.!.!. well!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!. junk!. I'm sorry but there really isn't a nice way to say it!.
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Most poems do not contain punctuation, so I would take out the : after You are!. But I like it its really good!Www@QuestionHome@Com