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Question: Could anyone help me with poetry!?
This would be with Simile, Metaphor, Personification and Hyperbole (all in one poem) If you could help me, I would be appreciated!. also if you could tell me where you found the poem and who it is by!.
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HELLO CANADA'' LATEST ORIGINAL POET

SOME SAY I AM APOET

Some say I am a poet, yet I do no know it,
Another says, you are cute,
I know they are in love,
Then what some, still some, do not like
And a very few despise,
Some and an isolated one does
Still ask,
Do you call this poetry!?

Am I a poet, yes I am,
Still I don’t know why those
Who gave me my good new name!?
Do me abandon and now
Do not like my writings and saying,
And they have knocked me off,
I m not complaining, from their
Fan mail and want me too to remove them too,
No I shall not do it I m sorry, for you!.

That for so many and yes many,
Many love and do not know it,
Some compare me to fellow poets of yore,
And love to stick to the past they love,
No not poetry it’s like actual history!.
Some love to delve in the future,
And modern feelings they’d like to nurture!.
Then they will come up and say…!.,
Well my trend was broken,
As some one had spoken,

What is it you are doing at the computer!?
Creating history, sarcastically,
You are no tutor,
No I had to say,
Then forgot it all
Yes what for you I‘d liked to display!.




IF

If you can hold your own when, others are outgrown,

And they lose their minds and upon you thrust,

If only you can confide in your friends, when others don't,

But let others have their way they want,

If you are still unpurturbed, by the harm they cause,

Or being denied your right, you do not heir’s steal,

And still do not stand to stare, nor look too unconcerned,

If you can still think of more fortunate, yet not envy those,

If you can still be calm and collected, and not let others irk,

If you can still let grief and happiness be an equal partner

And treat the two ironies, just the way one should,

If you can still share the fruits of your efforts

Taken away by others, who claim it as their own achievement!?

Or still better see them earn fame and name at your cost,

And you can still face the world squarely and boldly!.


If

If you can just forget the wrath and damage done,

And with a smile give them your clap and bravo,

And let each one of your foes, line up ahead of you

And never utter a sound of pain and sorrow!.

If you can still hold your cool, for long there after

To still be happy to bestow them praise

And feel not a bit of disgust towards malicious humanity

Expertly pass the message to them that you know, everything,

If you are the coolest one around in good company

Only you are yourself, amongst poor and the elite alike,

If no one is your enemy nor friend and both have a place!.

If all you know can look upon you, with equal measure,

If you are always your normal self at all times,

With a million jobs well done, taken as theirs

You are the sun of Wisdom, my progeny; all is your earning,

And what is most!.!.!.!.!.you are the only ''Human Being''!.

FORENSICS
Forensics can and do help in the search

Of unknown culprits who leave behind,

Remains of their unintelligent doings,

Eventually to fall flat in the sneaky game

Now it’s the turn of forensics experts,

Seemingly to all elements carefully search,

In the traces left behind by defaulters,

Can some one ever hope to unearth,
Surely not, that’s' FORENSICS worth!.


Without you tell me, where and how, will I stay!?

Just Remember
Redeemer that, me is, a girl in me;

We cannot make up our mind,

As hormones play havoc,

When we're in the bind!.

We have to still show, love to u we owe,

Or else you won't know-how our hearts' glow,

When we're out and the world is ours,

It is then our better half is yours!.

My love, my dear, at that bluefish phase endure,

My hand is still there, my touch is yours,

Your smiles are my loving possession,

Your presence is my very own passion!.

For ever for me a heart throbs, for all years,
I live with yee, reme mber this will thee!.


WHILE YOU ARE YOUNG


When the night is young and you are in your youth,
You are like blossoming all the way
Then why what makes one wonder
Why someone looked my way!.

When your young and the sky is blue
And someone walked away
Why would u think why she did not look your way!?


When you are young and you are about to be fresh
Why does someone from you run away!?
Tell me while your young and in the wilderness
What will happen that day!?



JUST IMAGINE CAN YOU

Sitting under an apple tree
Throwing pebbles at sea,
And when she makes me cry,
She actually helps me and makes me try!.

!.
I AM FIVE

Since I am the cynosure of your eyes,

I am what for many a one cries,

I am your hearts' throb,

Your very and very own breath,

Your very blood and sweat,

You’re true and very much your vision,

I am what you want me to be,

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