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Question: Can somebody please tell me what they think about my poem!?
can anyone tell me what they think this poem is about

My life's compass indicates no direction, my sight gives me no vision, my movements have no motion and my mind holds no notion, I set no standards or make no stands, my mind has enough to conquer and understand!.

You wonder and want to know what is it like, well you must forget all you've ever learned and ride down an avalanche with no ice nor snow, see others do thins that you'll never learn or know!.

You see quietness and confusion is my inborn personality, being misunderstood and rejected is my soul's reality, beyond anything else is peculiar and strange to me, the sun is too far i can't see, the sunlight is too bright it blinds me, the is too thick i can't breathe!.

You asked if i ever feel free, through the recess's of my mind maybe, but freedom has no interest in me, don't you see yet, All I ever known were restrictions and limitations, and my mind stays in this invisible prison, just put yourself in my position, as the world treats and talks to you as if your not equipped with enough to understand, hold th wind's hand and realize she's your only friend, hold the wind's hand and realize she's your only friend!.

Don't feel sorry for me, or try to be my friend, you and i will never walk hand in hand, i just have to accept that fate willed for my life to be astray, for me there isn't any right way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
your peom is a beautiful insight to the mind and i'm sure many people including myself can relate to your perfecftly choosen words x well done xWww@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a song almost!. I can relate to the message!. I would like to see it structured in stanza's though!. It would give it a more professional / organized look!. Www@QuestionHome@Com