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Question: Will you comment on !.!.!.!."Outlook Sunny"!?
I wrote this some time ago as a tease to my son!.!.!.!.smiles!.!.!.he has since learned a good work-ethic thankfully

Build it up
To watch it fall!?
Find yourself
Then lose it all!?
What is the point
In gaining ground
If it must be paid for
Pound by pound
I want it all
And I want it now
I will not stop
To question how
Tell me what use
It is to earn
Each dime I spend
For I have learned
It's much more fun
To be at ease
Let others pay
It's me I please!
Let others pay
For what I do
If you thought you could
You would do it too!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Had it all
Lost it again
Felt so small
Rose up to win
All I need
Let get away
Planted seed
I'm blown away
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cold hearted and very selfish I read
someday others you will need
life is more than fun
doing nothing in the sun
not in a million years
to do it too there would be tears
putting into this life your reward
live like this to die by the sward ! ! ! ! !

Have him also read this to him, or read it to him youself!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I wisht I could git someone else to pay my way through life!.

Not really!. I am proud of what I do to pay my own way!.

I do know others who are proud of the way they use our welfare system to get their way paid by us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think this could go to anyone's child!. Mercifully, most seem to get to adulthood just fine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like the rhyme and rhythm of this poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Great one! It just tumbles into place!. I wish you had written it when my son was younger; he and I both might have benefited!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This could easily apply for our son as well! Thankfully his wheels are now turning!. A fun read with a strong message!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pssh!
Kids!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Veddy good!.!. I like it!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com