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Question: I want to write a poem about love that gets u hi like a drud!.!. sme1 help!?
Your love is like a drug
that runs through my veins

A relaxing feeling
that drives me insane

it wraps itself around me
leaving me incomplete

i can't wait for the next hit!.!.!.!.
i can't think of anything else so if any one cn thnk of a way to make it better feel free
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
"that will rock me to my feet"!.!.!.because you need to rhyme with "incomplete", and since the previous part said it will "relax" you, you have the chance here to show that the "hi" feeling is more than just relaxation!.!.!.that it "rocks" you, which is why you're addicted!. The other suggestion I'd make is to capitalize "I"!.!.!."i" is too cliche!.

not a bad poem so far!.!.!.keep writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Check out the lyrics to Better than Drugs by Skillet!. That may help!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I could help but I don't do drugsWww@QuestionHome@Com