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Question: Do you like my poem, We'll find a way!?
We need some time to get away
Even if it's for just one day
All the pressures of the week
It gets so bad we do not speak

For our love is true and pure
Some time away will be the cure
For theses pressures wear and tear
It seems our love now goes no where

Lets get away, an exotic beach
And drink some wine, get slurry speach
We'll be alone, and who will care
We'll speak our minds and clear the air

We always knew our love was strong
It does test us when days are long
But all and all there is a light
We kiss each other every night

And when I offered her my hand
I promised her I'd be her man
No matter what the future brings
We made this promise with our rings
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that is a beautiful poem, I love the rhyme scheme, keep it up!Www@QuestionHome@Com

nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com