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Question: My newest poem!. please tell me what you think!?
Trust the world to be what it is,
But trust it not at all!.
Time's indifferent to what it leaves behind,
Shadows on the wall!.

Believe in me in all that I do,
But expect for me to fail!.
Frailty is the price we pay,
Learn from the tale!.

Judge the world not with your heart,
Or your mind as the case may be!.
We only hear what we wish to hear,
And do not understand what we see!.

Pray to be wise,
But expect to be a fool!.
Try to be kind,
But know you'll be cruel!.

Hope to know the truth,
But understand you will be misled!.
Life's like a book with pieces in code,
We don't understand the whole chapter,
Only that which can be read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
That is pretty amazing, you have a talent for writing :)

It's deep and truly incredible!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome! Could be a song as well :) Www@QuestionHome@Com

idk poems bore me but that one is cool not that coolWww@QuestionHome@Com

I actually like the content, but it sounds a wee bit!.!.!. contrived!. Www@QuestionHome@Com