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Question: Does anybody call this poem good for a first attempt!?
my first little poem with any effort, does it sound good to you!?

tapping my feet to spontaneous tunes
wearing my styles as I please
making my limits
and breaking them, too
you must do these things
to really be YOU
I'm dancing to my own music
running far and free
I'm finding out who I am inside
and the results look good,
to ME!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Beautiful meaning to it!. I love it :) And for a first attempt, wow!. You're good!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

For a first poem, it's great!. Keep reading and practicing and ya never know!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hey Sammy - you got the beat!.!. awesome first poem - keep writing!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like it!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

berry good!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com