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Question: Will you step out of your skin for a moment!?
Take a breath!.!.!.
Crush the grass and launch
yourself
the path in front of you
is clinging to your skin
your body works
with the wind
and the poets stand their ground
in the deepest part
of the bluest part
of the sky
you spin a smile with your body
and you are moving
forward
into unloved pastures
you must let them know
they are seen by giant eyes
you sway with the parched wheat
copper hillsides bend your trail
painlessly
and when your heart
becomes the world
you are free!.
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Hallelujah, I see the light!!!
Scream this poem from the highest mountain top!
I'm sorry, but your words have made my soul REJOICE!Www@QuestionHome@Com
When I meditate, I feel this way— one, and the same, with the world, in and with the wind and exploring "the deepest part of the bluest part of the sky"!. I soar and yet I no longer exist!. I am practicing to overcome this dichotomy to soar in the non-existence itself!. I love this uplifting poem!. It is exquisitely written!. I love it!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Another great one Mag; you have a great eye!. Reading your stuff puts me right there!. As for the skin thingy, I tried that once and had a hell of a time getting it back on!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
i like this very much!.!.i wonder will you read mine and sign my guestbook
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that was very good!. keep on writingWww@QuestionHome@Com
Stepping out of ones skin and retiring ones face, is a quite painful experience! But worth a try as 'your heart becomes the world-- you are free!.' Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh, I'm a fairy fluttering around, all through the woods!. Yes, it made me think of fairies!. Little dancing, sweet fairies!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sublime! The deep sleep!.!.!.!.!., when your heart is the world, and you are free (liberated for the while from your skin!)! A great piece of expression!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Beautiful words and thoughts! Inspiring!Www@QuestionHome@Com
My stomach is hurting too bad at the moment for me to think properly but I think that was a good one!. Of course, you always write good ones!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
In touch with the Spirit, those fleeting joyful flights when feet leave the ground!.
Kudos to your poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow! That's beautiful and yes i would!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Which is why I love the outdoors as much as I do,it takes me there!.Thanks,and good morning!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Sure!.!. it was beautiful Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow!!.!.!.Fantastic!
I see the vision you paint with your words!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yes, go with the wind and follow your dreams!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Gliding with feathered wings
that I made from cast off shedding
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omg that is wonderfulWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is a actual poem that I really like here on y/a!. TRULYWww@QuestionHome@Com
This is absolutely glorious!
I think you may have cured my fear of heights!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Oh so beautiful!. It speaks to my heart :)xWww@QuestionHome@Com
Wow that is fab thanks for sharing!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Fly!? did you just teach me how to soar!? I'm with Sue on this one!.!.!.do you mind if I let out a loud WOOOO HOOOO!? Brilliant!Www@QuestionHome@Com
ok !.!.!.your good at writing words!.!.!.but can you write out a check!.!.!.i need a loan!.!.my bank ran out of money!.!.!.!.seamanabWww@QuestionHome@Com
4 out of ten try better next time kid!.Www@QuestionHome@Com