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Question: What do you think of 'A Morning Buffet' poem!?
Ripples tiding waved Light,
Black, white, parallel lines,
Crisped air mimes tiny fog hands!.
Silence reigns loud colors!.!.!.
Red!.!.!.warning sailors!.
Gray!.!.!.indecisive fishers!.
Yellow, white!.!.!.deceiving Night!.
Kingfisher perches, eyes,
Dips!.!.!.flapping breakfast!.
Cranes stalk shallows, preen,
Fingerlings seen, eaten!.
Morning buffet's room service
For one!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Ummm!.!.!.!. I like the way that you leave only vague imagery so the readers can imagine the scene on their own!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
You have a keen eye and a keen wit, a love of both Nature and of words!. With these ingredients, you have created this feast of images!. "Crisped air mimes tiny fog hands" !.!.!.I could ponder just that for a very long time!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The stillness of the water, the birds in their patient pose and dive and subtle splash!. You paint a vivid picture and serve up a morning feast!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Pad to pot to pan to man
Leap frogging limits
Gigged and fried
Mustard batterupped
Crabs so shellfish
Soft and molten
Quick flip and gone
Tilapia on my plate
Ate enough and want more
Served on platters
Splattered with layers of
Alphabet soupWww@QuestionHome@Com
Colors do speak through their silence!. Another colorful picture of the water and life around it, from a poetic different angle of view!. Just beautiful!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Those Cranes might be headed this way, thousands gather to nest in
northern In!. before moving on to their next stop!.
Nice gathering of feathered friends in your picture!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Cool! I don't really get it, but I don't live anywhere near the ocean! The images it brings to mind are interesting, tho!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The eyes have a feast indeed!. The beauty of nature!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I wish I lived near the water, any kind of water, to see these things!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Must be a lot of beauty but with that surface beauty comes what!? I enjoy seeing postcards, don't know if I would want to spend much time exploring!. Now mountains!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
It does not make sense, the words are thrown together!.
I found it lacking strength and direction!.
Sorry, but it is only my opinion!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow! Chills! Visions! (Envy, I must admit!) Great! Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Dontcha just love nature at the bayou!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
You just described my pond and far better than I did! A festive buffet, life gifting life!Www@QuestionHome@Com
yummy! a gourmet meal for one but a feast for us all! delishusssWww@QuestionHome@Com