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Question: What do you think of 'Down the Road a Bit' poem!?
I did not want the sepulchre
Nor stone door
Nor womens' tears!.!.!.
Three days!.!.!.
I never died, just
Down the Road a bit!.

Shedding thorn crown,
Releasing rusted nails,
Laughing with Lazarus
All the while!.!.!.
I never died, just
Down the Road a bit!.

I do not revere Death!.
I will not wash feet!.
Such breathing flowers
Bloom,
Sins denounce the Holy!.!.!.
I never died, just
Down the Road a bit!.

Step off beaten Paths, and
Here I wait for you!.!.!.just
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You could read this literally and drag the heathen out! You do like to have an edge don't you!? Great refrain: just down the road a bit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This fascinates me!. Like you, I do not revere Death, only consider the metamorphosis to be ephemeral!. I will meet you there, just down the road a bit, if not perchance before in some moment of synchronicity!. Just a lovely poem!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Down the road a bit, you will find a white fence on either side of a drive!. Turn in and go to the mansion on top of the hill!. There you will find me awaiting your presence to dance the night away!.
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My website says, "When you come to the end, it's only the Beginning!." Beautiful poem! I'll see you down the road a bit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awww, I wanna cry now!. I guess we all will meet down the road a bit!.
I just hope I'm really late!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, that is poetry! With such refrain, who doesn't relate to such picture, one way or another!? Well done, Ely!Www@QuestionHome@Com

You and the Snide brought me a laugh this morning, and now you bring me a tear!. Thanks for both!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I am afraid that I don't really get what you're trying to say in this poem!. Remember me of Sylvia Plath!. It seemed that you'd survived!.!.!.!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Fear no more, in that great getting up morning!. down the road a bit!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Well done might warrior!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

316 to Bayou Blue
Left at light
Right to you
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I love the image, and as an agnostic who has no answers, I like this one!. It fits me today! Thanks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I adore it! We need more poems like this!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

oh my! you silence me this morning!. Www@QuestionHome@Com