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Question: What do you think of the 'Forever Dance' poem!?
Tinsled silver, crinkled crystalline light
Lustrously glowing embers in mirrors
Dancing Elfen of swirling dresses, shoes!.
Windowed snowflakes reflect candlelight moves
Futuring Holidays' delicacies
Daintily nibbled, set softly on lace!.
Silken hands attentively fanning air!.
Blushed rose cheeks cooling, curls recoifed on hair!.
Nimble fingers adjusting bodices,
Buttons secured, stockings lined once again!.
Elegant sippings of cordials, sherry!.!.!.
This Dance continues Forever!. Merry
Ancestors, Grandmothers passed on the Sight!.!.!.
Tinsled silver, crinkled crystalline Light!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I get pictures of Christmas Eve dances of old!.
You paint it well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
I danced with you into my own elven world, then was transported to LOTR!. I didn't see vikings, Thor kept them home just in case, as Odin created new weapons; hammer beating in time with the Elven music!.
Your painting shines with the magic of the otherly world, and I will go there anytime!.
Beautiful sonnet!.tWww@QuestionHome@Com
A Sonnet by Elys!? (or, at least something approaching that form) What a novel idea!. I love it!. You use alliteration and other word play so skillfully and you choose such original and interesting subject matter!. Another great one!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Why does this sound like it is in the grand ballroom of one of my stately southern plantation mansions!? Oh, my, my poor old mind is trying to conjure another mansion out of the air!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Lovely poem, I vision "Little Women" piano music and song!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Good!. Nice imagery! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very nice!.
Reminds me of winters in Nordvenhallen!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
A goody! Seeing it happen now, ruing the day I was born in the wrong century!Www@QuestionHome@Com
you are always a breath of fresh air thru the dark hallways of my mind!. This verse is no exception! wow!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Thanks for painting a bright and colorful worldWww@QuestionHome@Com
I really like it!. It shows good mood and spread a message of being merry! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com
You just described a movie scene that part of an old classic! Do you need an extra!? Good one!Www@QuestionHome@Com
This is so very beautiful and it made my morning a good one !.Thanks!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
What a lovely Christmas ball that will be!.
Good MorningWww@QuestionHome@Com