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Question: Is this a good poem, Its a Poem that is supposed to be explaining yourself, In texture color animal ect!.!.!.!?
What am I!?
I am the ever so soft feathers in your pillow,
I am the pearly white tiger of Siberia,
continuously running through the soft snow,
Blending in ever so calmly!.
I am the color red,
Bright and radiant,
I am the color green,
full of life and peacefulness!.
I am a silent snow storm,
fierce and elegant!.
I am the smell of a tundra,
sharp and fresh!.
I am the taste of limes,
sour, but ever so tempting!.
I am the sound of a tiger roaring,
bold and frightening!.
I am the son of Earth,
full of life!.
I am the dream of success,
The dream of becoming prosperous!.
Who am I!?
I wrote this for Language Arts, is the poem any good!? Thanks for your answers!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
To me you sound very expressive of the Animal you are suppose to be!. But I think you need a little more to go on, like do you make a sound, the things you like to eat etc,
Other than that I like it !. It shows you have talent, a gift that only you can put words together that has to mean something!. Good luck in the future!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
The imagery is great -- appealing and vivid!. Well done! You have talent!.
I would make a few changes:
* leave out anything you'd feel foolish saying in the 21st century, ie "ever so", "bold",
*IMO 'peace' is better than 'peacefulness'; 'rich' is better than 'prosperous'
*'fierce', when used about weather, usually implies violence and motion, whereas this snow is silent!. If it's a blizzard it's not usually silent; if thre's no wind it's not usually fierce!. Www@QuestionHome@Com
i think your poem is pretty good!. If you were trying to express who you are then you did a pretty good job, I think that expressing yourself is great with poetry b/c you get to be whoever YOU want to be and you did a pretty good job and i hope that you continue writing poetry b/c it's really good and i liked your poem!!
Keep up the awesome poetry!!
ZachWww@QuestionHome@Com
i dont know who you are because you say you are so many different things
i know thats what you were aiming fore though
are you god!?
have you heard that saying before!?
god is the sunset, and the face in a flower-
i like it- good imageryWww@QuestionHome@Com
If you ever doubted this poem then you are f*%&*g crazy!!!!
well is it a Lion or a Cheeta Hehe it reminds me of something fierce and strong Hehe,
well Good Luck on your assigment=D
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It's pretty good!. I like it!.
Are you trying to say you are God because you are in Everything!? Www@QuestionHome@Com
its a great poem, i like the last lines!. Try to edit out the lines anyone could write!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Wow!. That is so awesome! A ++++++ : )Www@QuestionHome@Com