Meant
to
live
not
to
die!.
Forever
to
stay!.
Living
a
lie,
Hoping
for
change
to
live
free
with
out
fear!.
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to live not to die!. Forever to stay!. Living a lie, Hoping for change to live free with out fear!. what do you think of this poem!? a little weird I know but what do you think=)Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: it sounds really good at the start!. but at the end it kinda hits a brick wall!. ''hoping to change to live free with out a fear'' !? it doesn't really flow with it!. hoping to change sounds good!. but then it hits the brick wall!. try to think of something that rhymes with that!. and it will flow better!. other then that i like it!. add: that sounds way better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Well the problem is that it's not actually a new form!. You are following in the footsteps of many generations of bards!. In the mid twentieth century, e!.e!. cummings took typographical word play to the outer limits!. Look at the poem below for example!. In just three words, cummings creates a picture, a mood, a world view!. It is subtlety and beauty and true strangeness an original poem-maker aspires to!. (a le af fa ll s)l one l inessWww@QuestionHome@Com There's not an ounce of emotion in that!. And it's way too simple!. Sometimes simplicity works, here, it doesn't!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I actually like it =] and that's saying a lot because usually I am very critical about poetry!. haha Www@QuestionHome@Com novelty thy name is potry some people r still old they like gold and few r new and they say phew phewWww@QuestionHome@Com thats not even a poemWww@QuestionHome@Com |