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Question: I just like posting my stuff!.!.!. :)!?
So hard to reside

In the secrets I hide

The guilt that I feel

The lies won't heal

Not just one but a few

I need to stop; not pursue

The pain

The rain

This heart

Is dark

To thyne self be true

Choose a new hue

Come out of this hole

This heart is coal

The lie

I cry

I feel nauseating

Inside I’m hating

The one I’ve become

I must be undone

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
stop trying to rhyme everything, you need to sit down, read some proper poetry and figure out exactly what you are trying to say!.
A poem doesn't always need to rhyme! Try a few hiakus before moving onto the bigger things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

uhhhh!.!.!. its ok i guess!. its reely confusing and i dont get it reely!. becuz u tried to ryme it doesnt reely make sense at all!. sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com

well ok thenWww@QuestionHome@Com