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Question: I just like posting my stuff!.!.!. :)!?
So hard to reside
In the secrets I hide
The guilt that I feel
The lies won't heal
Not just one but a few
I need to stop; not pursue
The pain
The rain
This heart
Is dark
To thyne self be true
Choose a new hue
Come out of this hole
This heart is coal
The lie
I cry
I feel nauseating
Inside I’m hating
The one I’ve become
I must be undone
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
stop trying to rhyme everything, you need to sit down, read some proper poetry and figure out exactly what you are trying to say!.
A poem doesn't always need to rhyme! Try a few hiakus before moving onto the bigger things!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
uhhhh!.!.!. its ok i guess!. its reely confusing and i dont get it reely!. becuz u tried to ryme it doesnt reely make sense at all!. sorryWww@QuestionHome@Com
well ok thenWww@QuestionHome@Com