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Question: I hope this sounds like thank you!?
Drained, I wilt upon my verse
Such energy required
Traverse

These mind fields of emotions
Less I give!. Submit!. Float on
Oceans

Waves of inner peace!. I find
Thru kindred spirits you each leave
Behind

My eyes close as sleep, at least
creeps in, to calm my soul!. The
Beast

Is held at bay!. For this
I rest and dream in peace full
BlissWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is a layer of skin, yes!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yes, there is so much comfort and support to be had here, and this sounds like you are thankful for it!. This is a lovely poem, very heartfelt and calming!. There is always poetry here from which to gather everything from enlightenment to entertainment!. And there are always answers to poems which offer critical and moral support!. There is much to be thankful for, and you state it beautifully and personally!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

"mind fields", "float on / oceans / waves!.!.!.", "peace full / bliss" You have an amazing way of oozing multiple meanings out of your words, and not a word wasted!. When I grow up I want to be just like you! :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

i'm not sure it says thank you,
but i really enjoyed it, it gives strong pictures!.
*shrugs* for me anyways
if that makes any sense at all!.

keep up the writingWww@QuestionHome@Com

All I ask is nothing
Tranquility in absentia
Favor me this for all I ask
Please dream for me
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The line breaks in this are absolutely killer!!!!!
Loved how you did that!. The content is beautiful, but REALLY stylin' there, girl, with those line breaks!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Awesome, i don't know if it says thank you though!?Www@QuestionHome@Com