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Question: A kind of reply to a poem put on a few minutes ago!.!.!.!?
I know it's not a question but I wanted to share it with all those equally emotional ladies out there!
This is another beautiful poem about spending time with our little ones :)

I hope my children will look back on today
And see a mother who had time to play!.
There will be years for cleaning and cooking
But children grow up while we're not looking!.
Dusting and scrubbing can wait 'till tomorrow
For babies grow fast we learn to our sorrow!.
So quiet down cobwebs and dust go to sleep
I'm rocking my baby and babies don't keep


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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
What can i say!.!.!.
Those words make such a touching connection!.
You just made my heart beat!.
Thanks!.
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Sober up and get real!.

One day you will wake and to your surprise,
your child will have vanished through your red blinkered eyes!.
You'll search and you'll search but you will not find,
that child whom you buried in the trash of your mind!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I'm not a mother or anything as i am only in year 9!. But that is really beautiful!. And so try!.

Thank you for sharing it with us!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love the last 2 lines of the poem, very touching!.Www@QuestionHome@Com