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Position:Home>Poetry> What do you think of 'Goodnight' poem?Question: What do you think of 'Goodnight' poem!? And so, Goodnight, Goodnight!. Cold winds, blue sky!.!.!.colder Night!.!.!. The clock watches me!. 3a!.m!. reminding!.!.!. May your dreams never fail To soothe you, Nor your problems last Overly long!.!.!. Find peace with these Words, for words Outweigh the Dark!.!.!. Always, the loved one Speaks to you in your Darkest hour!. And wraps you in the Warmth of wings!.!.!. And so, Goodnight!.!.!. Goodnight!.!.!. Always the morning hour!. Always a new Time Appears!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: "for words Outweigh the Dark" unequivocal truth thereWww@QuestionHome@Com You see this is why you are a REAL poet!. I would write 'Night!.!.!.I watch the clock' Goodnight (10!.34 pm) Stop all the boats, cut off your mobile Tie Snidely up to the kitchen table!. Silence the hens with crumbled buns Then sleep, weary maiden till morning comesWww@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful lullaby!. Thank you, Elys!. Angels on your pillow, & in the Jasmine under your window!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is very nice!. Especially when I am crawling between my pink satin sheets!. The sheets feel so nice on my naked body!. With your poem I shall have sweet dreams!. Good Nite!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Thank you for your good thoughts - very comforting for a good nights sleep - and may the wind be always at your back ?Www@QuestionHome@Com Beautiful poem it all blends together so naturally! Great job!Www@QuestionHome@Com That deserves some coffee and cold sweet potato pie!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Breathtaking! I'm going to read this to my daughter before bed tonight for some sweet dreams! You could make a fortune with a good illustrator (if you haven't already, that is!) LOL!Www@QuestionHome@Com Always ElysabethWww@QuestionHome@Com Always!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I could sit on Dondi's face too!.!.!.then he will have sweet dreams!. Nice poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Sun rise sun set, well done, sweet and comforting!.Www@QuestionHome@Com This is a great poem!.Www@QuestionHome@Com a good companion to go to bedWww@QuestionHome@Com |