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Question: What do you think!.!.!.an ignorant way to say something or maybe poetic!?
I am feeling down about custody because of my kids birthdays and the holidays and I wrote !.!.!. "I leave them in the hands of Justice and God it feels they are slipping from mine"!.!.!. people have been so rude about, what do you with an open mind and beautiful words think!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


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If I may; through putting your feelings into words complete your thought!?

"I leave them in the hands of Justice
God it feels they are slipping from mine!.!.!."
A silence comes to hearts that dine
When birthdays, holidays and special time!.
The space now left, er'r happiness played!.
My joy is gone, my tears ne'r stayed!.

My heart goes out to you at this time, as Halloween and Thanksgiving approach!. May your house be filled with the laughter of children!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its a unique way of expressing how your feeling at the moment with your life situation!. When I write about poetry I usually associate it with whats going in my life, to let out the feeling, because sometimes theres no other way to express it!. And thats really the only way to express it!. I like it, it has a great touch to it!. Why not extended I'm sure it could be something really beautiful, about the love you have for your children!. Hope this helped, and hope your children return back to you!.

"I leave them in the hands of Justice and God it feels they are slipping from mine" I try to grip for just a touch of what I given life to, but they fall further away from me!. Its like I'm chasing whats I want the most, and the more I try the more I suffocate!. The love in my heart, for all that I breathe for is slipping away from me!. The oxygen decreases as my heart has no will to go on with out them!. I pray before I sleep at night, bring back to me what was all I ever wanted!. And this love that lives in me for my children will never die, they are my one and all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Always in your heart forever they live!.
Taking nothing from them, always to give!.
Each day is a blessing someday they know!.
The love you give, the love you show!.

Not with you; but your love holds them dear!.
They love you each day, love so near!.
Holidays; each child knows their mother,
To take your place, they know no other!.

Time will ease the pain you feel,
They know that your love is real!.
Away from you they are, right now!.
God will show them, show them how!.

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