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Question: A Shakespearean sonnet written by myself!.!?
O’ who can say, that the day after next,
If my life, your life, or the world will exist,
What if it happened under false pretext!?
The angel of death lurks, dead in the mist!.
What would you do for the end of your life!?
If the end of the universe was nigh,
The choice is yours, wreak havoc and cause strife,
Or just wait for the end, your time to die!.
Be careful, for Armageddon is here,
True that it is, that death has appeared!.
But time it is not to cower and fear,
For the inevitable has reared!.
Death must come to all, the young and the old,
Your time has now come, so now leave this world
Please leave some comments etc!.!.!. this is my first poem that I have sat down and written in a pre-structured way =]Www@QuestionHome@Com
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I love this poem!. I've read it over and over, each time seeing more!. Yes, Armageddon is here!. The poem has a couple of lines that are not true Iambic, but I don't want to take a chance of losing all I've written!.
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The way to see if you have created the Iambic Pentameter of Shakespear is to divide your words by syllables, and mark which is the strongest part of the word!.t Www@QuestionHome@Com
It's a good first draft!. Remember that the most important part of writing poetry is the revision process!. Make sure your rhythm is sound (check line 7) and watch out for trite rhymes (nigh - die, here - fear)!. It is pretty good; it just needs a little more attention!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
Love it!. Love it!. Love it!. The choice of words and the theme, thumbs up!
If you don't mind please have a look at my poems!. I have posted two this week!. click ny username!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
well, only Shakespeare can write a Shakespearean sonnet, however your sonnet is good!. it follows the pattern mostly ( your 3rd stanza should have been efef not eeee but its ok)!. very good, keep writing!Www@QuestionHome@Com
amazing!.!.should there be gaps between the stanzas!.!.or should not all the lines be together!.!.just one big sonnet unit!?Www@QuestionHome@Com
Very good poem, love the way you put it together!.Www@QuestionHome@Com