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Question: I revised this poem that I posted a while ago, tell me what you think!!?
What do you do!?
When you can't find your words!.
When all that was,
Is no more!.

What do you do!?
When you think it is love!.
But you know its too soon,
To even have a chance!.

What do you do!?
When you've lost your way!.
Your friends are there,
But they aren't what you need!.

What do you do!?
When life hits you too fast!.
You roll with the punches,
And try to relax!Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It needs a tune now and should be sung by Cheryl Crow!. Seriously, it's catchy and I've already come up with some tunes in the key of F for it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i like it
it almost sounds like lyics
<3 it :DWww@QuestionHome@Com