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Question: What do you think of this poem!. !. !?
It's dedicted to a friend I am not close to anymore!. !.


Deflate Me

Deflate me,
Because you are weaker than me
Suck out all that I am
& try to change me
Into someone low like you

Don't accept me
Because I care
About life
About school
About my morals, my self-respect
Just because you drink,
Smoke
& don't remember what you did last night

Size me down smaller
Because you weren't a true friend
We used to be close
But I guess now is the end

Deflate me
For who I am
Because you don't accept me
But I don't care
Because I will never change!.


!. !.I just kinda did it spur-of-the-moment!. !. never edited it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Beautiful,,,, the best part is you are a leader and not a follower,,, and its your choice to smile,,,, Its beautifulWww@QuestionHome@Com

that is the best poem ive ever heard really !!!! you go girl you know how to write a poem and talk from a scale of 1 to 10 I give you a 25 your awesomeWww@QuestionHome@Com

Very good! I really liked it!. You are pretty good at writing poems!. This is the best poem I have ever heard!. You should write poems for your job!. bravo!!!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

thats really good!.!.!.im sorry you lost a friend ihope you find one just as good as the one you lost!. Best wishes for youWww@QuestionHome@Com

Good!. That has alot of anger in it!. Study poetry and you will seriously get REALLLLY far!.!. u have the talent!Www@QuestionHome@Com

its awesome i really like it i give u a perfect 10 it sounds great i really love it!. Www@QuestionHome@Com