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Question: What do you think of the poem I wrote for my brother!?



Baptize his soul in our tears, cleanse him of his haunting fears

Keep him in a safe place and just for me kiss his pretty face

Judge him by the love in his heart not the pain left in mine, give him your love so divine

His smile could brighten the shiny streets of heaven, if only you'll just let him

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's beautiful and touching! Keep up the writing!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

very touchyWww@QuestionHome@Com