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Question: Would it be creepy if I gave a girl this poem!?
1!. Me and this girl aren't extremely close
2!. I don't know how she feels about me

The time when I first saw your face
And looked into your eyes
I saw my future looking back
And felt that I could cry

For how could such a one as you
Consider one like me!?
I'm such a fool and don't deserve
This beauty that I see

Yet still each time I hear your voice
And hear you call my name
There's something strangely different than
When others do the same

Oh how can I convey my thoughts
And show you how I feel
I must admit that I'm so scared
That none of this is realWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It's amazing, I think that if you want to be closer to her, that you should give it to her, that way she wants to take the time to get to know you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Nice poem!. However, depending on what kind of person she is, she might think it slightly strange if you gave her this poem out of the blue!. You should get into casual conversation with her first and find out if she likes poetry!. Then you can show her your poem without saying you wrote it for her and ask her what she thinks of it!. If she's interested in you, she'll probably read between the lines and, depending on her reaction, you can take things from there!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

love the poem!. It wouldn't really be creepy if you gave a girl this poem!. It would be sweet!. If you think you don't know her that much, get to know her a little more; start a conversation with her etc!. If you want to know how she feels about you try to get one of her friends to tell you more about her!. Good luck!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't take this the wrong way, but PLEASE don't give that to a girl!. Believe me, that first stanza alone will freak her out!. Girls at that age don't want someone who is obsessed with them, they want someone who they are obsessed with!.
And at your age, guys aren't good enough at expressing their feelings toward girls through literature to write impressive poems!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

this sort of stuff doesnt work in real life, especially at a young age (which I'm assuming you two are)!. She will get freaked out that some guy is writing poetry about her, believe me!.

Ask her to a movie if you guys are young!. hold hand-> arm around shoulder -> kiss!. Works every time in highschool!Www@QuestionHome@Com

To her it would seem a little creepy if y'all aren't close!. I gave a friend that kindof poem except it was different but it still seemed creepy, so i I were you I would save it until y'all were closer!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I think its too intense for someone with whom you aren't that close!. Save it for a later time, and write he something "cooler," less passionate!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It really depends on how well you know her and if you will be able to accept that she may not like it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

No, I think it's great! You have a gift for writing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

get closer!. save that poem though so when youre close you have it on handWww@QuestionHome@Com

i think u really should give it to her!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com