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Question: Am I correct !?
L E T T E R S do not a poem make
Nor do words,
no matter how faNcY great
line
breaks
spaces neither
nor do similes and metaphors
are but sprinkles on the cake
to keep our heart's content
a poem is a poem only
if it finds a welcome home
within a reader's soulWww@QuestionHome@Com
Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
I'd eliminate do and are from stanza 2!. This is a great poem!. It found this reader's heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
So fantastic, it is so William Wordsworth!!!!
But if I a were you, I would exclude the line saying (like sprinkles on a cake) !.
Keep it up, poet : )Www@QuestionHome@Com
"nor do spaces
similes and metaphors
but sprinkles on the cake
to keep our hearts content"
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Thats great!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Yup!. Space for one more in here!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
so correct my dear!!
thats nice?! Www@QuestionHome@Com