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Question: What do you think of a bayou morning wonderland poem!?
Ambivalent hues sensing
Another watercolor-draped
Ambient Dawn!.
Do we not sing this Song!.!.!.

Serene perspectives, seen
Silently!. No words
Selected for necessity!.
Do we not sing this Morn!.!.!.

Marshes relinquish harbored
Meek beings!.!.!.flying, swimming,
Meandering worn Paths!.
Do we not sing this Dawn!.!.!.

Ducks, deer, cranes, mink,
Dot bayou byways!.!.!.
Disappearing to Sanctuary!.
See to sing this Forever!.!.!.

Once again!.!.!.as hawks swoop,
Coyotes pack!. Hungry Day!.
Do we not sing Life's cycles!.!.!.

By singing this Morning!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
It is visual, but much more than that!. The poem personifies the Marsh as relinquishing the animals!. Dawn is also personified as actively engaging in a task!. Marsh and Dawn and 'Hungry Day' are as alive in your poem as are the animals you describe, as is Life, a real creature in your poem!.

A marsh can be imagined by almost anyone--but not like this!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was 'meandering' in Key West paths for a while until the last stanza!.!.Its was painful 'shift', like been lifted by Chicago Sears-building elevator, to Grand Canyon!.
Tell Snidely that Mama hen is not leaving!.!.She is just playing a role in the life cycle for a change, so he can sing every morning, in tribute to his past accomplishments!.

Ely, I liked this verse, a lot!. Thanks! Www@QuestionHome@Com

There is a name for this form, it's on the tip of my tongue!.!.!.no damn me!.!.it's gone
AAAD,SSSD, MMMD, DDDS,OOD B!.!.!.!.I'm sure I've written one like this once!.!.!.!."any road up", as they say in Yorkshire!.!.!.!.another lyrical take on old Mother Nature!.!.!.!.!.here's hoping it will always be there!. I should love to see a Bayou!.!.!.the name alone conjures up visions of somewhere I can only half-imagine!.
I see swamps, tiny one man islands, moss hanging from trees, mist in the morning and the croaking of frogs, and a sudden crashing sound of a frightened deer!.!.!.!.But, perhaps it's nothing like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A beautiful picture you've painted!.

That Snidely rooster still doesn't want to stay on those eggs!
Mama hen needs a break!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like you need a gun just in case your serenading gets a bit loud and the critters come to chorus with you! Great opening stanza!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This one's a beauty!. I love the theme, internal rhyme and alliteration!. Lovely write and a joy to read!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I need one more cup of caffeine for singing purposes, then me and the cat choir will be in good form!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your using words this poor country boy don't know but very enjoyable once I got the meaning of the words!. Thank you for sharing!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Gorgeous! Www@QuestionHome@Com

I really can see it all!.!.!.I love the bayousWww@QuestionHome@Com

Marsha's coming Snidely!.!.!.!.
you better get back on that nest!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

BEAUTIFUL !!!!
I cannot choose any other words at this time!.!.!.!.
I remain humble!.!.!.!.
still on the eggs!.!.!.
(in your kinky bed)
now!.!.!.!.
Where is that hen!.!.!.!.!.!.!.
!.!.!.!.!.!.she has my corn!.Www@QuestionHome@Com