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Question: 2 lines to finish it =]!?
Im not that very good at rhyming or making poetry so here it goes ::

E is for emotions
mine are very true
with the strongest devotion
my hearts belongs to you

with the fear to love
and the love to fear
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cant think of the last two lines
can you!? or make it better!?
thank you for your help!.
-dejamarie!.
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
your first stanza is a bit off i dunno how!.!.!.maybe starting with "E" it makes it a bit basic somehow!. good job on the last two lines of the first stanza!.!.!.you are getting there

second stanza i like the opening line but the second not so much sounds a bit corny maybe!.!. try thinking about how that sounds and maybe you can think of another way of expressing the same thing

good luck

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