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Question: Have you ever needed extra sauce!?
Extra Sauce
By S!.F!. Reborn

Life needs flavor!.
See!.!.life has taste buds,
Anything bland gets chewed up and spat,
Right on the curb of existence!.
Boredom pays admission to sunless hours!.

Zest is not found in pity,
Nor is mind food filling without adventure!.
Brains are the biggest zombies!.!.!.
They have great hiding places!.

Before you swallow a jaw full of drab,
Seize life and throw it on a plate,
With onions and peppers and potatoes,
And a healthy splotch of extra sauce!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Wow, S!.F!., this is definitive in its perspective!. "Anything bland gets chewed up and spat, Right on the curb of existence!."—very powerful , vivid line, and it stays that strong as it goes along!. I am a bit shy, myself, but even I like a bit of sauce on the side!. As a metaphor for living life to its fullest, this is marvelous!. Thank you!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

Very well written!. I enjoyed it , I think I would use different terms, rather than the onions, peppers and potatoes , it is the only line you actually used food!. I would like something like, with spunk, personality and pizazz!. I do love the thought of the poem, kudos!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have very yummily elaborated on the phrase "Sieze the Day!"
All of the above, the more the better, and of Grandma Pat is right, GARLIC! Lots and lots of garlic!

*Lucky for you I have a wonderful dinner in store for me tonight, or I'd be cursin' ya!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh - I love that extra sauce!. But not before bedtime - just a side of warm milk will do!. Wonderful - life is just a great big food fest!. With all the ulcers, gas and heartburn - its a wonder anyone gets out alive ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

The unseasoned life lacks zest and verve, I take mine with a bit of tabasco, A-1, or Chinese hot mustard!. My spaghetti sauce has a whole raft of herbs in it!. Life without living is only existence!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Pass the sauce please, great poem, fiery imagery, great pictures!.!.!.wow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Wonderful recipe! Lots of garlic and fresh herbs to deepen the flavors and some good tabasco sauce for the heat! Www@QuestionHome@Com

Don't forget the garlic! Can't make a good sauce without garlic!.
More sauce, please!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Passions! The sauce of life!.

When we fulfill our passions, our passions fulfill us!.
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Drab indeed needs sauce
as for brain food!.!.!. low cal
Egos are big enough!

A fun read!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Sounds like a great recipe for life to me :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I tell you, I've been needing it the last few days!. I can't get anything done!
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