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Question: Do u like my poem i wrote!? on a scale of 1-10!.!.how good is it!?




theres just one thing
before you go
theres this person
that i know

she goes by the name of
mrs!. myles
i guess thats because
she always smiles

there is one thing
you need to get
shes one of the nicest people
i have ever met

shes affectionate and friendly,
caring and loving
behind her smile
i know shes not bluffing

inside her classroom
always smells so good
like apples, vanilla,
and even pine wood

so go ahead
on your quest
but trust me on this-
shes truly the best!


its about my teacher!. shes the nicest person i met!. do you like it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Very well done!. It is great to have a nice teacher - you can learn so much better with one!. When you leave her class - this poem would be a great good-bye gift to her!. I had a teacher that I never forgot - and I looked her up again - after many years - just to say "Hi"!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I like, I like!.
No It doesn't sound like you have a crush on her, you just aren't so perverted minded as these people and so you can say things like that comfortably which is a good thing!.
I'm assuming Mrs!. Myles is her teacher, and she smiles, and it rhymes so I'm sure that's why she used that!.
Don't listen to these people, It's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's cute, I give it an 8, but I would change the part about
"she goes by the name of
mrs!. myles
i guess thats because
she always smiles"

Because I thought right away, why would that name be because she smiles!?
Try to come up with a different rhyme word, or change yours around a little!. Like!.!.!.!.I love it how she always smiles!.!.!.!.or something like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I love your optimism! 10
So many poems in here are so pessimistic!.
10!. 10 10 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

10!!! 10!!! Bravo! I think you could give it to your teacher! It is awesome!
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It's a lovely poem =D

A++

^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com

Really cute, I like it------ I would not advise you give it to ur teacher- she may think you have a crush or are trying to suck up!.!.!. just my opinion Www@QuestionHome@Com

Aw, that's really sweet! You should give it to her; I'm sure it'd make her day!. :) Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Its alright!. Are you a lesbian!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I will give it a 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com

i love it oh no i cryingWww@QuestionHome@Com

Well, it sounds like you have a crush on her!.

also, the writing could be better, but the poem itself is nice!. In the 3rd section, you should end it "she's one of the nicest folks' I've met!." It flows better!.

In the 4th stanza, take out the word "the" between affectionate and friendly!.!.!.!. it drags!. the 5th verse is very poor!.

The final verse is ok, but find a way to lengthen the first part of the sentence, maybe like, "so go ahead, complete your quest" or say "so carrry on now with your quest" or something!.

I dont mean to be too harsh, but this will make it better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com