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Position:Home>Poetry> Do u like my poem i wrote? on a scale of 1-10..how good is it?Question: Do u like my poem i wrote!? on a scale of 1-10!.!.how good is it!? theres just one thing before you go theres this person that i know she goes by the name of mrs!. myles i guess thats because she always smiles there is one thing you need to get shes one of the nicest people i have ever met shes affectionate and friendly, caring and loving behind her smile i know shes not bluffing inside her classroom always smells so good like apples, vanilla, and even pine wood so go ahead on your quest but trust me on this- shes truly the best! its about my teacher!. shes the nicest person i met!. do you like it!?Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Very well done!. It is great to have a nice teacher - you can learn so much better with one!. When you leave her class - this poem would be a great good-bye gift to her!. I had a teacher that I never forgot - and I looked her up again - after many years - just to say "Hi"!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com I like, I like!. No It doesn't sound like you have a crush on her, you just aren't so perverted minded as these people and so you can say things like that comfortably which is a good thing!. I'm assuming Mrs!. Myles is her teacher, and she smiles, and it rhymes so I'm sure that's why she used that!. Don't listen to these people, It's great!Www@QuestionHome@Com It's cute, I give it an 8, but I would change the part about "she goes by the name of mrs!. myles i guess thats because she always smiles" Because I thought right away, why would that name be because she smiles!? Try to come up with a different rhyme word, or change yours around a little!. Like!.!.!.!.I love it how she always smiles!.!.!.!.or something like that!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love your optimism! 10 So many poems in here are so pessimistic!. 10!. 10 10 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com 10!!! 10!!! Bravo! I think you could give it to your teacher! It is awesome! Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a lovely poem =D A++ ^_^Www@QuestionHome@Com Really cute, I like it------ I would not advise you give it to ur teacher- she may think you have a crush or are trying to suck up!.!.!. just my opinion Www@QuestionHome@Com Aw, that's really sweet! You should give it to her; I'm sure it'd make her day!. :) Good job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Its alright!. Are you a lesbian!?Www@QuestionHome@Com I will give it a 10!Www@QuestionHome@Com i love it oh no i cryingWww@QuestionHome@Com Well, it sounds like you have a crush on her!. also, the writing could be better, but the poem itself is nice!. In the 3rd section, you should end it "she's one of the nicest folks' I've met!." It flows better!. In the 4th stanza, take out the word "the" between affectionate and friendly!.!.!.!. it drags!. the 5th verse is very poor!. The final verse is ok, but find a way to lengthen the first part of the sentence, maybe like, "so go ahead, complete your quest" or say "so carrry on now with your quest" or something!. I dont mean to be too harsh, but this will make it better!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |