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Position:Home>Poetry> Need some help writing a love poem?Question: Need some help writing a love poem!? well its just that plain and simple im usually good with these kind of things but i guess you could call it writers block but any ways i have one part that im pretty sure i will put in it here it is:
"the oceans cannot confine the tears that well up in my eyes when im away from you, so you must be mine forever, and i shall be happy" its obviously free verse so it doesn't have to rhyme, but any help will be appreciated thanksWww@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: the oceans connot confine the tears that well up in my eyes when im away from you, so you must be mine forever, and i shall be happy you are the sun that shines upon me, you radiate my happiness, my joy, my hopes so you must be mine forever, and i shall be happy nowhere can my love be confined, it flows out of me, and into you, i wait for every second i get to see you, hear your voice, speak your name!. so you must be mine forever, and i shall be happy!. -i hope this helpsWww@QuestionHome@Com the oceans cannot confine the tears that well up in my eyes when im away from you, so you must be mine forever, and i shall be happy happy as a duck ripples around in the muck trees will sing song very unhappily Your like a sailboat in the winds of my own breath Www@QuestionHome@Com words cannot express what you mean to me i love you more than ever, baybei it was ment to be if love was tears i would cry you a sea and if love was leaves i would plant you a tree i dont want you i need you because you are more than just a girl more than special more than perfect, you'r my pearls i dont know if i would cope without you live, breathe, eat or drink without you i need you! Www@QuestionHome@Com Write an anti-poem on love!. Turn all the conceits of poetic love on their heads!. Write the opposite of what you would normally express!. Dare to write the unimaginable!. Then you will be original and true!. "My love makes me think of water, She's as dry as parchment!."Www@QuestionHome@Com dear lover, your eyes are more heavenly then a moon pie your nose is a sweet as russian dumplings and inbetween your thighs is where i want to beWww@QuestionHome@Com so you must be mine forever, and i shall be happy for the remainder of all the days of our lives!.Www@QuestionHome@Com roses are red, voilets are blue you look like glue and i love you too!. Www@QuestionHome@Com |