Black Satin silken,
Changed to patchwork
Rambling dawnlight!.!.!.
Delicious, as one appetizer
Follows the last!.!.
No one need 'fast' forever
On Black sheets!.!.!.
Day's brunch on
Whitest!.!.!.
Past white!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
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Changed to patchwork Rambling dawnlight!.!.!. Delicious, as one appetizer Follows the last!.!. No one need 'fast' forever On Black sheets!.!.!. Day's brunch on Whitest!.!.!. Past white!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I was going to post an answer, but for some reason my laptop keeps falling off my lap!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm going to have to try black satin sheets, too!.!.!.will I disappear if I wear the black satin nightie!? And if I do will I get breakfast in bed!? Such questions, hmmm!. Now as to the poem, It is delicious with imagery and your uniqueness and I loved reading it aloud! Www@QuestionHome@Com I'm not a fan of the 'fast' motion; prefer slow music, slow dance, and 'slowness' quality of Satin, especially Black Satin!. I 'resent' quickie-cookies and take-aways!. That way, my "Days brunch whitest!.!. Past white"!. A shorty verse, with excellent imagery! Www@QuestionHome@Com After reading the other answers I went back and reread this poem, you know Dondi is right very kinky!. Now me it was 'nights in white satin' but that's another story!!!!Www@QuestionHome@Com Dondi always gives me kinky ideas when he's wearing his silky black undies!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Kinky and slinky ehhhhhh!.!.!.!.!.!. Good one!.!.!.!. I love erotic poetry!.!.!. This could be the start of something good!.!.!. delightful !!!! Can hardly wait!.!.!.for the rest of the story!. He he he he!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com I love the idea of night being made of black satin!. Gives me kinky ideas!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Dondi has the right idea!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Hmmmmm!.!.!.!. black satin sheets and you in that slinky kinky nightgown!.!. I'm gonna sneek the eggs into your bed!.!.!. I remain!.!.!. !.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.humble!. Kinky Blonde !!!Www@QuestionHome@Com I like a black satin morning poem!. Good ending!.Www@QuestionHome@Com take time for the morning to have a black silk dayWww@QuestionHome@Com I like it very much!. That reminds me, I haven't eaten yet!. Www@QuestionHome@Com I want breakfast in bed!Www@QuestionHome@Com I like it!. Short but to the point!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |