What are you thoughts on this poem-ish thing?

Question: What are you thoughts on this poem-ish thing!?

It is August!.
A dying breeze floats through a tree like a wisp of cotton!.!.!.
The leaves barely move!.
In an old hayfield,
A sleeping, aged soul lets go of the world!.
A final, content sigh creeps from his cooling lips!.
The final breath joins the fading breeze!.
In the same moment,
Without much ado,
A new soul slips through the atmosphere!.
She wriggles her toes and smiles!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:

I actually enjoyed it!.

Although I feel it could be refined a bit,
I obtained the message you did project!.

Nice job,
Sam
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i had to read it a few times to get it ,, its realy good Www@QuestionHome@Com