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Question: DO YOU THINK MY POEMS GOOD!?
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disease
some trust it wont occur to them
as if it differentiates between color, race, or religion
age matters none
cancer, hearts disease, diabetes
often found in bothe the young as well asthe elderly
a glance into ones eyes reveals nothing
look deeper, you will find even less
disease in the human race is common, though feared
cures are commonly made
though some go unfound, leaving those cursed to pass
life goes on
yet those heros will be remembered
in my heart, and hopefully in yours
some theres no cure, though surgery is treatment
others arent so lucky
to heaven they shall go

---god bless you annabelle, together we beat the odds, the 2% chance wehad at survival was enough to show the world our strengths, the challenges we faced only brought us closer, we entered the world as one, conjoined in the spine, legs, and heart, though we will leave as one, our heats will forever touch!.

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
WOW, r u in composition or something!? u should enter it!.!.!.!. I bet u anything that u would win!. : )Www@QuestionHome@Com

yess its really good Www@QuestionHome@Com