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Question: Child abuse awareness poem!. what do you think!?
i wrote this for child abuse awareness!. would you take a look at it and tell me what you think!?



a bantam man defined
To you, who took all I had left-
I hope it made you sick,
While I sat crying in my room with scars of what you did!.

Did you smile as my tears flowed!? did you chuckle and laugh!?
Did it fill that hole inside, to take what I had left!?

I was just a little child, you were old and gray!.
Did you think youth would return or did your mind just stray!?

Hatred runs down through my veins, your face, in mind, destroys!.
Did you find pleasure in your loins to treat me like your toy!?

In my memory you will remain as but a twisted mind
Forever now with my disdain a bantam man defined!.

Tell me now,
What do you think !? Did it make you a man,
To force a small child on a bed and take her at your hand!?

Tell me now,
For I can't see how, in the mirror, you can look!.
Do you see a man so tall or do you see the truth!?

I hope that hole inside you filled, for my heart it destroyed!.
The years of hatred in my core somehow left a void!.

My life was lived insensible to everything around
No smiles or tears could make me feel and so the knife I found!.

I was cutting to find pain, the only proof of life,
While you sat smiling, lying, cheating on your loving wife!.

My own reflection appeared to me as a repulsive scene,
Did you delight when you had found I hated to be seen!?

As I washed and scrubbed until pain to rid myself of you
Did you sit and take your time to commemorate what only we knew!?

Think now,
Are you still a man after what you've done,
After you took a little girl just to have some fun!?

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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
This is amazing!. I don't know if it is written for personal experience or not, but if it is not you have a fantastic ability to summon up the emotions that relate to such events- without making it sound manufactured (does that make sense!?) and if it does come from personal experience!.!.!.well, I think you would be really brave to display your emotions so intristicely after such a horrible experience!. This poem is perfection!. I would love to read more of your work- post some more :)!. You are an amazing writer!. Wow- definately the best poem I have read posted on answers!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's incredible!.
It disturbs me how true, and emotional it is!.
If this happened to you, I'm so very sorry!.
I love the poem, NO child should be treated like this!.
It makes me sick to know that so many are, though!.
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Wow,That's great! As a survivor of childhood sexual abuse I really feel what you feel!. Awesome poemWww@QuestionHome@Com

Nice =)))))))))) <- see all those smiles! Well its not a smile, its my mouth moving so fast when it dropped!

Nice work x ) u rockWww@QuestionHome@Com

It's deep!. Are you okay!? You should take legal action!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i think its beautiful and it touched me, i got shiversWww@QuestionHome@Com

one world*publish this piece of treasure before someone else take it *Www@QuestionHome@Com

I have a soft spot for paedophiles, a very deep, dark, blade-filled soft spot!.

Your poem brings the realities of lasting pain and damage kicking and squealing into the harsh light of openness, where they should be!. If it is autobiographical do please let me know the perpetrator's name and address and I would be only too happy to have a word in his ear on your behalf!.Www@QuestionHome@Com