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Question: Since we are music bent, what about this melody!?
Melody
The melody must start, pianissimo
Time is soft, shadows comforting, soothing
Embrace the melody, embrace noted birds
Float on bubbled air, softly, with hammock sway
Time is slowing, heightened senses, enrapt
Melody builds, tympani brings far off urging
Body moving, fluid, rhythmic, boneless flow
Each note resonates, surging, beating, freeing
A lover’s arm enfolds you now, beating too
As drumbeat builds, the flute’s piper calling
You bodies now entwined, flowing, glowing
Melody driving, spirits soaring…crescendo
Ethereal floating, melody calming, fading
Time eternal, rhythm eternal, love eternal
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Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
We should title this day 'Poets in Love!." This is wonderful, musical, soft, loving--exciting at the same time!. This is the way a true poet describes the act of love!. If only it were truly eternal!.!.!.
S3 L3: Consider changing 'your' to 'our!.'Www@QuestionHome@Com
Damn, neonman, you know how much I need to find picky things like 'you/your' to pounce on - and you spoiled it for me!.
Poem!.!.!.oh, yes!.
Not only is it a delightful poem for its content, but also it has a beautiful fluidity!.
It is a piece of music in words!.!.!.!.a deaf person reading this would be able to gain some understanding of what music is!.!.!.and how it builds to a crescendo, before finally dying away!.
Lovely stuffWww@QuestionHome@Com
Loved the poem, but the only melody this old lady is hearing is--"Memories"Www@QuestionHome@Com
Reminds me a bit of Yanni, "Reflections of Passion"!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"rhythm eternal"!.!.!.CRESCENDO!
Niiiiice!Www@QuestionHome@Com
Delightful thoughts to lull me to slumber-land!Www@QuestionHome@Com
My favorite music, Neon! Compose forever!Www@QuestionHome@Com
She plays a mean flute!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com
"Stardust" You and Hoagy!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com