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Question: Have you attempted a tanka!?
Waiting to be served
Clouds like sweet potato puffs!.
Sugar spun, drizzled!.
Fluffy, crunchy, delicious!.
Enough for all to partake!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Sounds just like how my family eat sweet potato!.
My favorite day after thanksgiving breakfast is sweet potato, sausage stuffing, creamed cauliflower, turnip all mashed together and fried till crisp served with a side of eggs and toast UM!

Glump for Breakfast
Brown sugared sweets
with marshmallow puffs
tangy sausage stuff
creamy vegetables
all crispy fried eatables Www@QuestionHome@Com

See, this is what I should have written!.!.!.!.my brain holds back just too much sometimes!.!.!.!.but, here!.!.!.well, if you want the clouds to be edible why not!.

I like it!. Course being on a diet as I always am, next time I see a white fluffy cloud I shall immediately think of food!.!.not good, not good at all!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Mmmmm! You made me hungry!
No, it's not easy crunching all that into a tiny little morsel, you did it!Www@QuestionHome@Com

pro forma notsoicus easius!.!.!.swell doneWww@QuestionHome@Com

Yours is sweeter than mine!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Love those crunchy clouds!. You did it well!Www@QuestionHome@Com