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Question: Okay, did I write an Acrosti-Ku!?
Elements in space combine
Getting denser, until in time
Great planets form a poet's rhyme!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
Yes!. EGG!. Expanding Gaseous Globules!. Molecular cloud star forming regions!. And with new stars you get some really big honkers, superstars!. And they explode as supernovae and populate the EGGs with heavy elements!. And the EGGs condense and form more stars!. And in their afterbirth, I mean, in their planetary nebulae, in the Goldilocks zone, there will be planets with liquid water, and eventually pond scum, and just a little further up the evolutionary tree, poets!. Woo hoo!

In the silent realm of white light chatter
Weaving stars through fingertips
She reaches out acros't Orion
Lifts the Dipper, sloe glass she sips!.
Eternal lady, Celestial queen
Embracing all of Hubble's flow
From primal dawn to age unseen
Time's arrow never left its bow!.

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I didn't know they had to be about food - but, mine kinda ended up there (crackling - pork rinds) so I suppose I just sneaked in!.

Nature covers a vast area - so I reckon yours qualifies!. Nice to have the rhyme, too (that's not compulsory, is is!?)

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I do not know!.!. but I will write this in reply as it seems the same number of syllables!.!.!.!.

Plate of food of which I write
Easily would take a bite
A tiny green splendid sight!.

Is that an appropriate answer!? I am really trying hard to work with food!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oodles and Oodles
Of Kraft Mac and Cheese Noodles
Eaten with great gusto by poofy poodlesWww@QuestionHome@Com

Evadne!.!.!.I'l opt for a Martian melt-down!

As for the egg (above) I guess so!.!.!.best reply I can come up with at the moment!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You can't forget the food, I'm FREAKIN' STARVIN'!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

I was gonna say something about pork rinds (again) but my answer was deleted!. Are pork rinds against TOS !? :)Www@QuestionHome@Com

I would like too say,"the yolks on you" but it was good and I liked it a
lot!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

I found a big Hai'ku thing!. I will send you the link!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Yeesh, I thought Cinquains were bad!.!.!.!.!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I concur! Forget food! Forget nature! Let's just write!.!.!.free for all at the Mars Bar and one round on Eva!Www@QuestionHome@Com