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Question: Is the Guardian Angel concept a mutuality between both parties!?
Gathered in a heap
broken Angel's wing
bristling feather blood
on bone what am
I supposed to do
with her
now!?

She weeps without sound
wounded and weak
I tell her I cannot fly
and she tumbles into the warm
light, her face a decoration
in my hands her bones still
bleeding what can
I tell her
now!?

She thins herself in the air
her eyes are hollow
and serene!.
I allow her mercy
to crush me fully
and we weep together
blood on bone
Blood
on bone!.



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hauntingly beautiful, dark!. real!.your guardian angel knew what she was doing when she chose you!.and you haven't failed her!. you inspire!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Are you asking in relation to your poem here!?
My angels that surround me are not there because I asked them to be!. They are there because I need them to be!. I am glad they are there, but in essence, they are forced upon me and remain because someone or something else told them to watch over me!. I would never ask them to vacate from me!.
As for in your poem, it is morosely ethereal!. Quite beautiful in a dark, gothic way!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This exquisite poem opened my eyes, opened my heart and opened my arms!. It gives your guardian angel an enigmatic fragility that brings tears to my eyes!. Your response of selflessness wrenched my heart!. And to you both, my arms are open wide!. Thank you!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oh, wow!.!.!.do I ever feel close to you right now!.
Never felt closer, this poem pulled me smack into you!.
I'm so at the place you were when you penned this,
whether real or imaginary, I'm SO there!.

This bled, wounding even, any who allow themselves to be transported by it!. I need to remind myself to breathe as I read it again!.

SueWww@QuestionHome@Com

Alignment with the music of the spheres personified as the celestial being!. I love the poem!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Tell her words will heal the pain
rhyme will staunch the blood
Tell her to come back again
when you're in a better mood!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And the wisp of wings,
covered in blood,
will beat no more!.
Til thy eyes and hands can heal her!. ?Www@QuestionHome@Com

I study your free verse!.

It's the best around in my opinion, or rather it's the type of writing I prefer!.

How your 'own rules' marry messages is "cool "!.

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A guardian angel with her own angel!. A soul seeking mercy or acceptance!? You did the right thing in angelic terms!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

!.!.!.I want the angel
whose darkness doubles
to absorb the brilliance
of all my troubles!.!.!.


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