Ok!. I looked up Tanka!.!. and this is what I came up with!.!.
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Dew kissed webs suspended
Leaves subtly yellowing
Moon sliver rests low in sky
Sun crests distant hilltop
As eyes turn heavenward
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************************** Dew kissed webs suspended Leaves subtly yellowing Moon sliver rests low in sky Sun crests distant hilltop As eyes turn heavenward Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: I know not of Tankas, yet, but if it is, it is sheer beauty!Www@QuestionHome@Com Not quite a Tanka, the syllable count is out on a couple of lines!.!.!.we're being really strict here, folks!. 5, 7,5,7,7!.!.!.but great imagery and a nice read, nevertheless!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |