Today I’m seven!. I’m seven, but I wish I were eleven!. We load into the van and head off to the mall!. I go into kids Gap and wish I could go into the “real” Gap!. I see the older girls go in and wonder why I can’t!. They have pretty hair, and pretty clothes, talking on the cell phones, probably to their boyfriends who are a lot more pretty than my boy friends!. They buy sweaters that are low cut, and don’t have funny little butterflies like mine!. I forget about the butterflies as Daddy calls!. I miss him!. Ever since he bought the business on Long Island, which is in a whole other state, I only see him on the weekends!. It’s really annoying ‘cause Mommy’s always yells at me!. Especially about school!. Isn’t a 93 a good enough!? Guess not!.
Today I’m eleven!. I’m eleven, but it’s not what I expected!. We load into the van and head off to the mall!. I go into the “real” Gap and buy shirts without queer little butterflies but Mama won’t let me buy the low cut ones!. I guess that’s why I don’t have an attractive boyfriend that I can talk to on my cell phone…if I had one!. We have to pay sales tax, ‘cause we moved to a whole other state for my dad’s business!. I still miss him!. Ever since we came to Long Island, I only see him after school for a few hours but he’s too tired to do much!. Mama’s equally annoying and is continually on my case for things, especially school!. A 89 is a good grade, isn’t it!? Guess not!.
Today I’m seventeen!. I’m seventeen, but I wish I were eleven!. We load into the van and head off to the mall!. I go into the “real” Gap but can’t afford much!. I meet up with my boyfriend who thinks he’s attractive but he’s always on his cell phone!. Apparently low cut shirts aren’t as miraculous as I had thought!. I’m sick of this state and of my dad’s business, where I work for a few hours!. I afraid that I’ll miss him!. Ever since he’s been too tired, the doctor’s have diagnosed him with some disease!. Mom’s not bothersome at all!. In fact, she rarely leaves the house, never the less sees my grades!. A 64 sucks, doesn’t it!? Guess not!.
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