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Question: What do you think about this poem, and what do you think its about!?
I wrote this awhile ago and changed it a little bit!. I hope you like it, im only 15!.

"Stay"

You must stay the voices say
For these bones lay among stones
These stones, alone, for they simply lay unchanging
You have much to learn
You musn't turn or you shall burn this chance to just a glance
You live to give and suffer to become tougher
Don't end it, just reach the bend, it tends to lend
It gives to live, remains to gain
Redemption no longer temptationWww@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
OMG!! That's amazing, really!. I am 14 and that's really cool that u have that much talent!. Since ur a guy that's even more amazing!. Stay with it cause u really do have talent!. If u write any more email them to me!. My email is!. Tanneradellgiles@yahoo!.com!. I would have a crush an like e every guy if they could write like u!. Good job! ;)Www@QuestionHome@Com