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Question: What is the urgency!.!.!.!.!.!.!.!?
You must hurry
Echoes loudly in brain
Piercing refrain
Hurry, hurry, hurry
!.!.And thoughts
Run into each other
Looking for an exit
Colliding noiselessly
As surrounding walls
Take on surreal glow
!.!.Thoughts
Spinning
Out of control
Fading
Into shadows
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I loved this expression!.!.!.many levels of interpretation here make it all the more strong!.
Keep a hand held cassette recorder with you at all times, and when those thoughts collide, speak them into it!.!.!.!.!.before they fade into the shadows!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

Hurry is definitely a negative!. I am a hurrier no matter what I am doing!. I just went shopping and fell getting out of my car!. I came inside to put my groceries away and banged against the wall going to another room!. Your poem is an excellent description of anxiety and stress which I suffer from and am absolutely unable to slow down!. We need to forcefully calm our thoughts and think only of what we are doing at the moment!. Hurrying can be dangerous! Your poem is very good and such a good description of this problem!. Slow down I say to the writer and to myself and others!. The issue is the faulty frequency of the workings of our brain needs to change!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

I usually pad the walls about this time!. It seems to soften the echos, just enough to hear them one at a time!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

You have expressed very well my Monday mornings!.
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Welcome to my world!.Www@QuestionHome@Com