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Question: What do you think of my new style!?
Welcome to My World!

Descending into
the depths of despair
Screw despair!
Such a pretty word for
Madness
Angst, depression
Nope, none of the above
It's madness I've
entered into
Where's Sybill when I need her!?
I'd like to be someone else, too!.
The company would be nice!
Look for the light, they say
Such fools!
There's only darkness when
one is blind!
Don't they see!?
Why is madness so feared!?
I relish in its freedom!
Never liked the rules
of sanity anyway!.
Welcome to my world
don't try to help
you just want me to feel
your own pathetic misery
I see you like company, too!
Let me be!. Close the door
when you leave
bloody dogooder!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


Best Answer - Chosen by Asker:
one huge honkin' AMENWww@QuestionHome@Com

Goodness, thanks for the warning I might have freaked for sure!
LOL!

I really like it!. The words fair screamed off the page to me, not just because of the topic but the way it flowed!. I was able to quickly fall into a cadence of reading!. It caught me and took me whole along for the ride!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

This is great! I read the first two lines and thought , "aw jeez, here is another one!.!.!." (exactly as I was supposed to think I'm sure) and then you totally turned the tables!. Reminds me of something Eliot would do!. Thanks for sharing it!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's the nice young men in the clean white jackets for you!. Let them take you in, there's lots of empty corridors to run down here, screaming out in gleeful misery!. Well done!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Now that's how to write a Rant of the First Order!.!.!.at the risk of being a do-gooder, can I send you a box of old dishes to smash on a rock!? I
always keep a supply handy!.!.!.hang in, Sue!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

You're stylin' for sure! Style is style however you express it and baby, you got it!!! I understand exactly what you're saying, which scares me to death!!!!! lol!. peaceWww@QuestionHome@Com

They're just jealous cause they can't hear the voices!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Cuckoo- ca- choo- choo brain
cracked tracks running through the meadows
of your mineWww@QuestionHome@Com

No quotation marks needed!.

Bing-
O!Www@QuestionHome@Com

We are riding this train to gether !.!. SUE!.!.
I am riding with YOU!.!.!.!.
sanity is far to greatly over rated!.!.!. woo hoo!.!. chug a chug!.!.!.!!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Good jobWww@QuestionHome@Com

ooooh!. I really like it!. great job!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

And who is writing this!.!.!.you or Hydro!? lol Are you related!?Www@QuestionHome@Com

Your hair is the same colour so that style has'nt changed yet!.!.!.!.hahaWww@QuestionHome@Com

It looks the same to me!! Good poem, by the way! (((hugs)))Www@QuestionHome@Com

Oooh! you little rebel!. :)
A woman after my own heart!.Www@QuestionHome@Com