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Question: A poem that has come upon me that I must share!?
Sorrow
By S!.F!. Reborn

There were no trees, no grass,
The land was devoid of life!.
There was no music, or light,
No sign of life!.
Not one flower, or bee,
Nor birds above!.
No hope, no smiles,
No feelings of love!.
No love wasn't there!.

Only pain, and sickness!.
Hopelessness and despair!.
Not one word of comfort,
Nothing hiding a care!.
The smell of death,
Came from the very air!.
Loneliness was a coat,
Although billions were there!.

All suffering and crying,
And dreading tomorrow!.
Hell expands itself,
For eternal sorrow!.Www@QuestionHome@Com


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So sad & barren!. Hell will be a terrible place!.
And they wonder why we try so hard to spread the Word!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

The first paragraph
is of sadness!.
Life with a lot of sorrow
is depression
Too quiet is lonely
Nothing that would bring confidence
The rest of the poem talks about
hopelessness
causing pessimism
and a negative outlook on life!.

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If ever there was a good description of sorrow, this was it!.
But when the sorrow is over (can it ever be eternal!?) how much more joyous will the joy be!? "in the night there are tears, but joy comes in the morning"Www@QuestionHome@Com

Remember the road to Hell is an eight lane highway, so it is filling up fast!. Been there and done that, an old saying but still true!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

i that reminds me of my self(i going though depression right now) So it let me know everything going on in my life!. thanks for sharingWww@QuestionHome@Com

AWW this makes me sad!!!!!!! im going through a hard time and it reminds me of myself but i want to be more positive if your oging through something hard like that be positive and have FAITH =)Www@QuestionHome@Com

What you just described is, indeed, hell!.
I've never heard it described so well!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

A (contemporary) very dark picture!.!.Www@QuestionHome@Com

It's a beautiful day in hell!Www@QuestionHome@Com

wow!.!.!.that is very sad, but even so it is very good poem!. Www@QuestionHome@Com

hmmmm
seems like a place I may have been a time or three in my short life!.!.!.
not planning on going back!.!.!Www@QuestionHome@Com

Been there!.!.!.!.man I don't ever want to go back!.!.!.!.lights on Www@QuestionHome@Com