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Position:Home>Poetry> Here is another piece for Emmy's book for Christmas, do you have any suggestQuestion: Here is another piece for Emmy's book for Christmas, do you have any suggestions to make it better!? Six Months Old-An Emmy Poem
by C!.S!. Scotkin Emmy has a tooth, She’s trying to stand up She’s eating real food She has a sippy cup!. She’s finally growing hair She has her Mommy’s grin She really grabs for toys With vigor and with vim! She swims across dry land She can chew her toes How she gets her foot so high, Heaven only knows! Six months old, what a joy! Her grandma has such pride, Then I noticed, with much awe Emmy has my eyes!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Best Answer - Chosen by Asker: Nope, no suggestions whatsoever! When she is old enough to have this read to her, she is going to be delighted!. I bet it will become one of those 'Read it again, Grandma' things!. Just one thing!.!.!.!.this is perfect for Emmy, but with a couple of small changes would suit any child (for when you get a book publishing contract) Baby has a tooth and Then she notices, with much awe Baby has her eyes Lovely stuff!. Www@QuestionHome@Com Why not try to make this more of a nursery rhyme type of poem!. Here is an idea!. Emmy Emmy, tipsy turvy standing falling, standing falling swimming too swimming free across the land across the world Emmy Emmy smiley smiling grabbing toys, grabbing toys and chewing toes, chewing toes their her own, their her ownWww@QuestionHome@Com I love it! I wouldn't change a word!. Congratulations! This time goes so fast, it is wonderful that you are keeping track of it through your poems!. One day it will mean she will always know you, always touch you, and know how much you love her!.tWww@QuestionHome@Com This is very cute!. Emmy will cherish this as she grows older!. You can add her picture to the poem to make it even more special!. Be sure to laminate it so it will last forever!.Www@QuestionHome@Com It's a nice poem for a nice granddaughter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Perfectly amazing!.!. i love it!.!. she will be so proud you take so much pride in her as i do my own grandaughter!.Www@QuestionHome@Com Crying, just crying!.!.!.!.This is perfectly delightful!Www@QuestionHome@Com AWW!. Very nice just as it is!. I wish I could bring my toes to my head!.Www@QuestionHome@Com |